Writing sample term 2

This is my writing sample for term 2
My goal: I write sentences of varying lengths for effect and show control of my longer, harder sentences.
Where I am at: I try to use a variety of sentence structures simple, compound and complex.
My goal is improving my sentence structure because I think I could work on spending more time on making them longer sentences and better because I think this could really help in my writing. This is my goal.

Dioramas project week 9 Reflection

Dioramas project Reflection

This week we had to make a diorama
The learning that was involved in this was making the shapes and reading the dark life story. Millie and I had to read the story then make the 3d shapes and also paint everything to make it look like under the sea and the submarine. The tools we used to complete this where paint, sand, one shoes box and also paper and a pencil.

As a team Millie and I completed the diorama on thursday we were happy with it. This is not the best work I have done but it is ok I must say. I am proud because we completed and the painting is good I think. I enjoyed working with Millie. I found making the shapes was a little hard but also waiting for the paint to dry. The time paint takes to dry made us lose a little bit of time because we did four coats on the background.

This is my reflection on the diorama Millie and I made.

Week 8 Geocity

Week 8 Geocity

The task we had to complete this week was called geocity. It is was helping us learn how to do geometry and remember shapes. We had to make a drawing with all different shapes on paper you had to make a plan after you had learnt about all different shapes. After all that you would make 3d shapes out of paper doing all the measuring and cutting out the shape. I completed the learning and the drawing out but did not complete the making of the 3d shapes I only made one. This is not my best work because I did not finish.

I like the look of my Geocity and how simple my design is I like it.
I found the work really hard to make a 3d shape I struggled with the making of the geocity. The making of the Geocity I found a struggle because I could not understand how to make the 3d shape. I have learnt how to make some shapes in 3d know.
I am going to work on this and work a little faster to complete my work.