writing reflection

Writing reflection

I have two goals I am working on, The two goals are Ideas and punctuation I am going to tell you what I am going to do to work on these.

Punctuation
I use punctuation like commas and full stops but I need to add it in the correct places. I understand some punctuation but not all so maybe you could provide us a workshop on things like commas, ellipses, semicolons, and dash. At home and school I can read a book and find the punctuation and why it is there. So here is a little bit of what I am going to do and what I already now.

Ideas
I use lots of ideas in my writing but it is my goal. How am I going to work on achieving this well, I am going to get feedback and feedforward from other students and hear there
Ideas. I will also suggest some workshops towards this goal, my first suggestion, maybe you could do a workshop to improve on emotion and facial expression. Number two maybe something like, how to plan out our planning in better ways.

The A,M,P show

The A,M,P show 2018

I was full of emotions, When I was getting ready to enter the hurricane, we only had a little while to wait. Minutes later… we entered I jumped on, Zoe and I had butterflies in our stomach.

5,4,3,2,1 BANG! Of we went we felt like we were flying through the air. My eyes were stuck open from the pressure from the air. My body was stuck solid. Swish going through the air  I could hear loud sounds and Zoe screaming at the top of her lungs.

Finally the ride has ended, we were so dizzy, my ears nearly fell of from zoe screaming so loud. That's one ride I while never go on for a long long time.

24 Hour Digtal Footprint

We were learning about our 24 Hour Digital Footprint. I learnt that we can go back 24 hours to see what we have done not just that but even before that I was very proud to see that I was doing a good job on the internet. All the icons can link to my things like blog, drive, Mathbuddy and things like that hopefully you like my post. I found it easy to find what I have done so I can just click right onto the history tab. I found it hard to get all the links onto that one google drawing. I really enjoyed finding all my history from mounths ago. Next time I need to be quick at getting one link onto the google drawing. My Blog Post shows I am a Stepping Up learner.